In writing we had to write a recount about a mentos and coke explosion.
The Volcanic Coke Catastrophe
The study and the lab home rooms were sitting outside the back of the staff room in a group staring at a blue plastic chair wondering what would happen.
Suddenly Miss Thomason who was standing next to the chair pulled out a large bottle of diet coke and I immediately knew what was happening.
Then Miss McCormick came out of nowhere from around a bush and started watching the bottle of coke with the lab and the study.
Then when no one was expecting it Miss Thomason pulled out a small tube of mentos and everyone quickly realised what was going on, it was a coke explosion.
First Miss Thomason slowly opened the lid of the large coke bottle and she dropped one mentos in the bottle.
Miss Thomason instantly stepped back expecting something to happen but nothing happened.
Suddenly Miss Thomason who was standing next to the chair pulled out a large bottle of diet coke and I immediately knew what was happening.
Then Miss McCormick came out of nowhere from around a bush and started watching the bottle of coke with the lab and the study.
Then when no one was expecting it Miss Thomason pulled out a small tube of mentos and everyone quickly realised what was going on, it was a coke explosion.
First Miss Thomason slowly opened the lid of the large coke bottle and she dropped one mentos in the bottle.
Miss Thomason instantly stepped back expecting something to happen but nothing happened.
(This Is NOT Completed)
I really liked this because it is fun writing about such a cool and interesting experiment.
I really enjoy your writing even though its a work in progress its really good. Maybe next you could fix the format. This reminds me of when I did a coke explosion.
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