Hi Kieran this is Jaren I liked the way you had a well sentence with no mistakes and had good words. Maybe next time just put the reasons why you like small countries.
Hi Kieran I like the way you put the England flag behind all of the slides. Next time you could make the background brighter. This reminds me when I did the same thing.
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ReplyDeleteHi Kieran this is Jaren I liked the way you had a well sentence with no mistakes and had good words. Maybe next time just put the reasons why you like small countries.
ReplyDeleteHi Kieran I like the way you put the England flag behind all of the slides.
ReplyDeleteNext time you could make the background brighter.
This reminds me when I did the same thing.