Stegosaurus
Big tall and strong.
Big blue and bulky eyes like diamonds.
His breath smells like peppermint plants and cold neck shivering fog.
He slowly lifts one giant foot in front of the other making the ground shake as he steps.
Cold, tough and hard scales.
Large green leaves in his big open mouth.
He had a big loud strong voice and says “I am a stegosaurus!” (Even though he is a brachiosaurus)
Hi kieran
ReplyDeleteI like the way you've added the brackets to tell the readers that he is a brachiosaurus. I fell like you might need to ease up on the word big and swap it for other words. I remembered the time I first watched asdf movie and when I saw the stegosaurus, I burst into laughter!
Hi kieran it's me your sister.
ReplyDeleteI love how you used so much desription language in your writing was.
Maybe next time you could make sure it doesn't go off the screen.
This reminds me of the time that you showed me the meme called 'I am a stegosaurus'.
Thanks Leo for the comment about my poem and this comment shows that im doing something right if you know that im talking about the stegosaurus from asdf movie.
ReplyDelete-Kieran