Hi Kieran I like the way you added pictures with your similes. Perhaps you could try and make the writing a bit bigger so you can read it properly. I remember when I did mine and i did mine about a baby, a cupcake and a boy. You should check it out sometime. Hayley
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Hi Kieran
ReplyDeleteI like the way you added pictures with your similes. Perhaps you could try and make the writing a bit bigger so you can read it properly. I remember when I did mine and i did mine about a baby, a cupcake and a boy. You should check it out sometime.
Hayley