The Volcanic Coke Catastrophe

In writing we had to write a recount about a mentos and coke explosion.

The Volcanic Coke Catastrophe

The study and the lab home rooms were sitting outside the back of the staff room in a group staring at a blue plastic chair wondering what would happen.
Suddenly Miss Thomason who was standing next to the chair pulled out a large bottle of diet coke and I immediately knew what was happening.
Then Miss McCormick came out of nowhere from around a bush and started watching the bottle of coke with the lab and the study.
Then when no one was expecting it Miss Thomason pulled out a small tube of mentos and everyone quickly realised what was going on, it was a coke explosion.
First Miss Thomason slowly opened the lid of the large coke bottle and she dropped one mentos in the bottle.
Miss Thomason instantly stepped back expecting something to happen but nothing happened.

(This Is NOT Completed)

I really liked this because it is fun writing about such a cool and interesting experiment.

Piskel

Today I used piskel here is my work.

I would like feedback on what I can improve on.

Compatible Numbers

My goal is learning how to use compatible numbers.

154 + 139 + 246 = ?
154 + 139 + 246 = ?
154 + 246 = 400
400 + 139 = 539

=539

Family Tree

Our task was to make a family tree of our close relatives.
I would like to know how much you liked this slide from a scale to one to ten and what I can improve on.

Stegosaurus

Stegosaurus

Big tall and strong.

Big blue and bulky eyes like diamonds.

His breath smells like peppermint plants and cold neck shivering fog.

He slowly lifts one giant foot in front of the other making the ground shake as he steps.

Cold, tough and hard scales.

Large green leaves in his big open mouth.

He had a big loud strong voice and says “I am a stegosaurus!” (Even though he is a brachiosaurus)

Similes

England